dilluns, 16 de març del 2020

Problem-Solution Essay_ Roser Garcia


Nowadays there are a lot of teenagers who have toxic relationships with their couples, in which, sometimes there is gender violence, machismo, aggressions... Abuse in general, it's currently become more and more often in our society so what could we do?

First of all, we have lots of young couples who can't have a proper gender education, so that makes these people think that men are better and superior than women. This kind of thinking is common related to the machismo movements which are used to happen in cities. It's very necessary a gender equality education to all the teenagers and children with the purpose of avoiding this kind of relationship troubles in future.

One possible solution is that schools offer additional gener equality education to all the young boys and girls, so that can make them see that there's no difference between women and men, and that we should treat everybody the same way we would like to be treated. I honestly think that this solution will help a lot and would make the society better.

Another possible solution is to make the teenagers believe in their own opinions, make them believe that their opinion is as valuable as an adult one, and make them choose the right way to become great adults in the future.

To conclude the abuse, the machismo, the gender violence or even the toxic relationships can increase if all of us try hard to change the minds of that people who nowadays believes that men are above women.

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